@@ -27,3 +27,3 @@ It is likely that physics, as implemented by the [[universe]], can be simulated
-If [[continuity]] is important, you may instead substitute some kind of gradual transfer process in which a mind is replaced piece-by-piece with alternate hardware: a sudden switchoff of consciousness would be either noticeable or epiphenomenal and thus inelegant.
+If [[continuity]] is important, you may instead substitute some kind of gradual transfer process in which a mind is replaced piece-by-piece with alternate hardware: a sudden switchoff of consciousness would be either noticeable and inelegant or epiphenomenal and thus inelegant.